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flowerjk 发表于 2023-3-10 22:54   只看TA 11楼
从第一章看到了第三章了，看来妈妈还没完全被攻破啊，只是间接吃了精液。节奏还是稍微快了点了，稍微再慢点，多些描述黑丝的镜头呗，从慢慢感受后面再深入进去，以及妈妈的身材也再多描述一些啊，让人更多联想一些。还有就是向上面一楼说的，女的或者妈妈再反抗多些，再到接受的过程会好些。再看了一下时间已经2个月没更新了，难不成这篇要断尾了么？作者加油啊，继续更新一番，还是有点意思的，别结束了
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Wb229190 发表于 2023-3-24 10:48   只看TA 12楼
文章写的很好，也很引人，希望作者大大早日更新，好的文章别蔫了。。。。期待更新
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