红莲玉露 发表于 2022-9-17 23:37   全显示 1楼
成熟的写作功底，剧情叙述非常流畅，具有神作潜力。
当前章节整体上看，属于序章性质，交代了基本角色。
女一号应该是苏婉晴，听名字就像性冷淡，期待她反差的一面。
母亲林采蝶已经暗示得很明显了，直接坐等床戏即可。
微妙的是陈艾的角色定位，主角要相亲了，前女友人呢？

期待更新！
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